Hi Laura, sorry we missed your critique in class today! I can't really get a good look at the flower design, I can't enlarge it for some reason. Right now it feels a little large with the type though. I kind of like the idea of that henna design being integrated with the type some way? For example, maybe the design is contained in that "empty" shape and is broken up with the type going through the middle, does that make sense?
Hi Laura, sorry we missed your critique in class today! I can't really get a good look at the flower design, I can't enlarge it for some reason. Right now it feels a little large with the type though. I kind of like the idea of that henna design being integrated with the type some way? For example, maybe the design is contained in that "empty" shape and is broken up with the type going through the middle, does that make sense?
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